JokerGem's comments Page #4

I would suggest to you: joining the poetry portion of this site to get feedback and support for this type of writing....most likely it will be taken down from the grammar page as it is not applicable here....

Splendid!

Real quick, something l've been wondering about that it seems may have been overlooked: once a poem has been submitted, if you edit the title or content in any way, it seems the site deletes the poem's genre selections and does not allow them to be restored or denoted again going forward—which is discouraging...
Could there be a way to fix, or get around this circumstance? more »

Well-constructed and hopeful theme....worthy enough to me~

If this is supposed to be Angelina Jolie's son then the birth info is incorrect .

Real quick, something l've been wondering about that it seems may have been overlooked: once a poem has been submitted, if you edit the title or content in any way, it seems the site deletes the poem's genre selections and does not allow them to be restored or denoted again going forward—which is discouraging...
Could there be a way to fix, or get around this circumstance? more »

Thanks a million
– hearing that is most appreciated! Yes, vocab-wise l really went for it in this one....

Absolutely, you have my permission! It reads correctly now...thanks for being receptive my correction! Keep up your informative content--
Jeffrey~

Touché

Teri, this was informative and on-point except, l think your wording for the football reference of 'blindside' was confusing and perhaps could use an edit. "Cannot see the football being thrown from that side?" Did you mean the linemen on that side are also blind to the quarterback? --Because l think the phrase solely describes the quarterback's inability to see the rush from that side when in passing mode. more »

I must say there is something here...a style, a flair, and an approach l admire. I nearly voted for this now l regret l didn't.

I enjoyed this despite the subject not necessarily being something enjoyable. Well written work~

I was baited to check out this article...LoL. ;-)

This is quite profound. Maybe too deep to follow without rereading as you go but the message permeates. Awesome word selection and the closing stanza is just terrific! This is definitely poetry for advanced players. more »

Glad you liked it. I write about this particular topic and viewpoint quite frequently, I just wonder how many more are out there who're fed up with a 'medical' field that's essentially tampering with us more than the reasons we seek it out for. I'm to the point I consider it snake oil for what it's worth. more »

i purposely used 'reigns' instead of 'reins' because i meant dominance or widespread influence (as in medicine [big pharma] is the major player) but thanks for the comment

Good show!

You are quite welcome, and thanks so much for your shared insight and rating. I had a feeling this one would not escape your attention as, this subject is....just so unfathomable.

Honestly, myself, l am intrigued by the multitudes present here and can go on a clip reading and exploring, so I'm grateful this platform exists at all. Also, just curious if you may be left handed? -As l find your work very creative and cerebral... more »

Thanks!! Yeah, this one l've had in the works awhile and finally taylored it to a viable theme. I don't brag about this stuff but when l feel good about something that l've produced (and l do here) it gives me a kick that it gets recognized! more »

P.S. you're not too shabby yourself....

Glad you like it, Steve...was wondering if anyone else was going to happen upon my stuff!

This may not always be the case but it seems only a third of the participants are reading all the entries, so perhaps many votes are going absent.

I admire the freedom and brevity this asserts; for some reason it really struck a chord with me.

Thank you and thanks for reading. There indeed are effective and promising alternatives which need to make their way into the mainstream.